Aaron here, Robert’s out today but he made a podcast yesterday asking us how our ‘Write a Book’ project is going.
Yesterday, I ran out of ideas so I started going back over my work. I found parts to add more detail into. When I was reading over my work, I was asking myself questions as if I was the reader. For example, I had written that I was nervous and when I read back over it, I added 4 sentences saying why I was nervous. I like editing because it makes your book much better and you’ll get more readers. Here’s a picture of my editing work:
Thanks for reading – that’s all for now,
Aaron
5:34 pm on January 15th, 2014
Wow great! good luck Roberto dsablo!
12:54 pm on January 16th, 2014
Nice neat writing Aaron!
12:58 pm on January 16th, 2014
Class Robert
1:11 pm on January 16th, 2014
Your story looks deadly Aaron. Well done!
1:13 pm on January 16th, 2014
Well done on the podcast, Robert. Great job everyone involved in write a book!
1:26 pm on January 16th, 2014
Thanks Andy and Leon. I am sure your stories are good to and I’m really having fun editing my work.
1:29 pm on January 16th, 2014
Aaron I love the way you fixed your story
3:06 pm on January 16th, 2014
I like write a book so much
3:12 pm on January 16th, 2014
I am really enjoying the write a book project it is really cool!
3:01 pm on January 17th, 2014
Great story Aaron you really fixed your story and great idea.We don’t do write a book in our school.Maybe we will do this next year.
7:23 pm on January 17th, 2014
Thanks Dylan and I do think your school should do it. It is really fun.